...all the downright dangerous shenanigans
going on in the world, I create.
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| "Deliver us from Evil, one Beasturd at a time. Amen." |
I must thank Mr. Porretto for the opportunity to share my work with you, his trusting readers (fingers crossed that a few of you will thank him, too). I passionately favor Jeffersonian Liberty; passionately oppose Hypocrites of all colors, flavors, and shapes, regardless their field of expertise or station in life. If, through my work, I can show them-and-their-kind the Fool and/or dangerous, I will have succeeded. I know I'm not the best creative I can be, so I honestly ask for your help in getting closer to that goal. Tell me if my characters aren't likeable/believable or are just plain MEH; ditto for their quandaries or solutions to their problems. Additionally, let me know if I use too many: obvious anagrams, commas, far out foreign words, or am just too wordy, generally. (I probably won't ever give up: hyphenated-words-and-phrases, ellipses...or parentheticals. You can try.)
I write fiction for several reasons, not the least of which is to
shut-the-voices-up :-). (Of course that only encourages the ones
previously in the wings to step to center stage, so off we go again.) Many ideas come out of pure frustration noted above, which is primarily "political" - and fiction therefore serves as a way to vent, constructively.
I'm pretty quick to assess news and other information, so unfortunately
can come across as purely "opinionated." But believe me, in the face of
compelling feedback in the case of my creative work, or new facts about
some real-world issue? I'll readily accept my mere-humanity (maybe get a
little embarrassed) and change my method or my mind, depending.
You'll find my work quite different from the other Liberty-Literature out there. My theory is that I choose "magical realism" or "paranormal elements" because I'm a bit too timid for the times, and therefore for my own good! By weaving in such otherworldly- or fantastic- abilities, my good-guys and gals can often avoid the whole getting down & dirty & bloody & gutsy. They avoid (as do I, as their "cinematographer") all the throat-cutting, all the exploding skulls, and all those beyond messy crime-scene cleanups and explanations. (Just so you know, I'm not opposed to such doings. For instance I take pride in being in the first wave of Rob Olive/"Essential Liberty" fandom; find my
Amazon review here.)
The following is my first offering at the Torch. It was written in April and first posted on my writing blog.
"Three if by fire"
Part 1 of 5 - "Don't change horses..."
Yoshi Pratt bolted out of the
nightmare and straight up in bed. The 26-year-old D.C. native’s hand flew to
his heart. He pressed mightily, as if the wildly beating thing would break free
at the next beat…or the next.
It didn’t. He threw off the now
cold clammy sheet and swung his legs over the side of the bed. He couldn’t stay
up. Still too many hours before the alarm would screech.
From the bathroom, by shear
contrast in the dark, the mussed up bed’s expanse of pale colored cotton-innards
glowed. He grabbed the top sheet; it was far from dry. He flipped on the
overhead fan. His dream, like the fan on low, was still going around and around
his mind lazily. Though Yoshi didn’t think much about politics normally, the pulse-pounding
final scenes had been nothing but.
When it came to Washington
machinations and his so-called civic-duties, he’d describe himself as frozen in
time. 26-going-on-18.
After college he’d tried living at
the ground zero of American politics. Had dreams of working at its newspaper, The
Post. That dream died, however, with multiple rejections; quickly followed by a
bailing roommate, then a near-zero bank balance. He preferred renting a stranger’s
basement than bunk for “free” with parent-babysitters in his boyhood room. Now
he lived just over the river and through a wooded part of Virginia.
Though he’d finally been hired by
a suburban newspaper, the 18-year-old in him was still angry at The Post’s
rebuff. To “punish” their stupidity he purposefully donned a political
cone-of-silence. Lifted it for one thing only: the Presidential Elections. He
went back under the cone after the inaugural parade. This time the election
“cycle” seemed to last years.
“To torture us longer,” Yoshi’d
joked.